Kia ora Riccashaye, my name is Vanya and I am a year 8 student in Te Ngahere at Paihia School. I have been going through your amazing work that you have been doing this term. I have been reading your slideshow about your special place. I would of said the same thing that you said because you have lived there for 11 years. Another thing I would of said was, I would've missed my friends. Have you lived there all your life?
Kia ora Riccashaye ko Te Aroha toku ingoa and I am a year 9 student at Te Kura Tuarua o Peowhairangi. How you described your special place was excellent. You used some good words to describe how it was special to you and it painted a picture in my head of what it may look like. Maybe a bigger description though just to get a better picture, apart from that you did well. Just like you, I also have my special place where the majority of my childhood memories are. You made me imagine my version of a special place for me which made this a quality blog post. I think you need just a slight improvement in your presentation as it doesn’t seem relevant to the topic, the colours were very fun and bright though which was nice to see. Do you have any other special places you would like to post about? If so i’d really look forward to seeing them. Kia pai to mahi.
Kia ora Riccashaye My name is Dayton and I am an year seven student from Paihia School. I really enjoyed your blog post about your special place. I liked how you explained what your special place is because everyone has a special place. When you explained your old house and how many years you have been living in it, it shocked me because I have lived in Paihia for nearly seven years. What I enjoyed was you explaining your old place and telling us your special place. Next time you could add more information about your house. Did you have some fun times at your old house? Overall, I think it’s good. I hope to write more comments to you. Sincerely Dayton.
Kia Ora Riccashaye my name is Katipa and I’m a year 8 from Paihia School. I really liked your special place presentation because it tells me how much you love your house and that you don’t think it’s garbage because I love kindness towards ANYTHING. It also reminds me of MY special place and that’s my nana’s old house. Because there I had a lot of very VERY special memories. For example my Nan’s love roamed the house everyday I was in it. The sad thing is she has passed away and I miss her everyday. As much as I would like to know your old house’s secret I respect your honesty of not wanting to share it and hold no grudges about it. But if you don’t mind me asking, what happened to your old house? Don’t answer it if it’s to personal for you and I apologise for getting to far in your life.
Kia Ora, Riccashaye My name is Isabella and I am a student in Room 4 at Tautoro School. I am 7 years old. I really like your your Slideshow about your special place and I liked how you explained your house. I have also lived at heaps of houses and I did not want to move them but I had to. I had heaps of memories in all the houses that I lived in. I know how it feels like when you move to new houses and you don’t want to move. I liked your work how you explained your old house and your secrets and your memories. Blog ya later.
Kia ora Riccashaye, my name is Vanya and I am a year 8 student in Te Ngahere at Paihia School. I have been going through your amazing work that you have been doing this term. I have been reading your slideshow about your special place. I would of said the same thing that you said because you have lived there for 11 years. Another thing I would of said was, I would've missed my friends. Have you lived there all your life?
ReplyDeleteyes i have lived there for my whole life i haven't even been to my new house for a year and thanks for the comment
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Riccashaye ko Te Aroha toku ingoa and I am a year 9 student at Te Kura Tuarua o Peowhairangi. How you described your special place was excellent. You used some good words to describe how it was special to you and it painted a picture in my head of what it may look like. Maybe a bigger description though just to get a better picture, apart from that you did well. Just like you, I also have my special place where the majority of my childhood memories are. You made me imagine my version of a special place for me which made this a quality blog post. I think you need just a slight improvement in your presentation as it doesn’t seem relevant to the topic, the colours were very fun and bright though which was nice to see. Do you have any other special places you would like to post about? If so i’d really look forward to seeing them. Kia pai to mahi.
Kia ora Riccashaye
ReplyDeleteMy name is Dayton and I am an year seven student from Paihia School. I really enjoyed your blog post about your special place. I liked how you explained what your special place is because everyone has a special place. When you explained your old house and how many years you have been living in it, it shocked me because I have lived in Paihia for nearly seven years. What I enjoyed was you explaining your old place and telling us your special place. Next time you could add more information about your house. Did you have some fun times at your old house?
Overall, I think it’s good. I hope to write more comments to you.
Sincerely Dayton.
Kia Ora Riccashaye my name is Katipa and I’m a year 8 from Paihia School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your special place presentation because it tells me how much you love your house and that you don’t think it’s garbage because I love kindness towards ANYTHING.
It also reminds me of MY special place and that’s my nana’s old house.
Because there I had a lot of very VERY special memories. For example my Nan’s love roamed the house everyday I was in it.
The sad thing is she has passed away and I miss her everyday.
As much as I would like to know your old house’s secret I respect your honesty of not wanting to share it and hold no grudges about it. But if you don’t mind me asking, what happened to your old house?
Don’t answer it if it’s to personal for you and I apologise for getting to far in your life.
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Isabella and I am a student in Room 4 at Tautoro School. I am 7 years old.
I really like your your Slideshow about your special place and I liked how you explained your house. I have also lived at heaps of houses and I did not want to move them but I had to. I had heaps of memories in all the houses that I lived in. I know how it feels like when you move to new houses and you don’t want to move.
I liked your work how you explained your old house and
your secrets and your memories.
Blog ya later.